Odi et Amo
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I enjoy how you portrayed it from different angles, it added an edge to the piece and allowed you to use tons of emotion as well as imagery. Found an excellent balance in your vocabulary, kept it simple yet powerful and poetic. Twist in your story was nice, good flow, good structure and amazing emotional, vivid way of expressing everything.
Nice piece!
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