Ha, this was nice. Great vocab. It was more like an story telling/ poem. The emotion was nice, felt the character's feeling. The imaginary was good, i can picture the hard times the character has been through. Yo and your wordplay is mad fucking dope, very creative. But The twist at the end was very mysterious, "Living with no legs, in my eyes is an evil fate, i would never debate, conversate, or wish on another person". I was like "WTF" Did on the first sentence did the man said "Look at his cute legs", but now the man dont have no legs?........That's fucked up, but i felt the pain.

Nice drop man

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