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Old 05-19-05, 01:10 AM   #8
Triple_N
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the intro is wack....the uh, uh, uh is wack....20 g..I thought you'd change ya delivery one a beat like dis..."if it don't make dollas it don't make sense"<---how many times u dun said dat?...but the delivery was blan...usually u got a strong beat behind u so its a nice contrast but on this u needed more energy....large...awww son your even duller...an ya vocals are too low....lyrically not impressive son....ya lines was weak son...flow was repeitive too.....doc...I ain't feeling dis dudes voice...his flow is mechanical sounding....damn his lines is weak...shit is seriously played here...very generic sounding verse....an the delivery was blan too.....I wasn't feelign what y'all did wit da hook neither....I gotta say this was a disappointing drop from you 20 not up to par wit ya usual drops...no hate jus realness..u know son....stay up...1
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