Hmmmmm, ok lil imaginary, but you needs to elevate on that. Nice emotion though, kid keep doing like that and your bound to be a good poet writer. I like the rhyme scheme you used, but keep using that rhyme scheme, and add more description and feelings on-to your poem's. It might be short but it holds a bigger amount of emotion.

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