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Old 05-19-05, 09:49 AM   #4
L. Veracity
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^ you could've said that way nycer =\...mean ass!!...

never heard this beat before, it's madd low so I still haven't really heard it =\...

but yeah, your quality's okay, it's not the worst I've ever heard, but yes, you should make your lyrics more complex...the hook was kewl, I like your singing on it, you were on key and everything...ya 2nd verse was better than the first...ya flow is pretty nyce though, you just gotta do better on ya lyrics, but that last bar was nyce though kyd, do s'more like that and you'll be fine...keep at it...
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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