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Old 05-19-05, 03:01 PM   #35
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From: I F0rg0t...h0l 0n lemme think
This was feedback posted for Judicial

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Personals-Judicial....u got him on this category..Teph u had a nice personal in there to.

Punches-Tephlon..only seen one but the "Hot text" punch was funny and creative.

Vocab-Judicial....nice use of vocab

Multis- None...try usen sum multiples in there

Structure-Judicial...Not hard to read.Teph ya structure was fucked up playa.

Overall Vote-Judicial due to the personals,vocab and structure. Teph u had one extra line over the specified number of barz.
Both emcees had a nice verse honestly...all i gotta say now is just elevate more.

*this is how i'd vote if i could,but im only given feedback
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