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Old 05-19-05, 08:25 PM   #7
morse code
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Voted For: Da King

freestyledaboss-WOW, terrible structure, a few punches but hardly any and the ones you had were wack...strecthed lines, bad flow, and thats about it, lol...elevate kid

da king-try to make your lines more even cuz they didnt match in length, lmao at some of the punches though, they were funny, liked the mj one and the bra one, lol...

overall-
opener:da boss
closer:tie
flow:king
structure:king
punches:king

v/da king
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