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Voted For: The Black Plague
Damn good battle.....ok heres the break down....
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Bone---The only plaque black'll get is in his teeth ,The way he spits that grimey stuff..
....You Live in hell? and unemployed!?Shyt Guess times is rough?.-----nice punch but really didnt hit
keep deep throating ,and giving head, Hopefully you'll get sick
Cus like ya crew name Black Loves All Dick.----nice personal and punch here direct hit
You speakin the truth? .. But you think you gon win..
Why hate,im getting another W,like i was V twin..*----complex punch but still a good one
Ill crash your rhymes ,Like dale enhart your'll last hit'll be the wall..
hell huh? Well now you can say you live below us all...----oooo nice one this is ur best punch great set up and knock down
..Put Vision on your rhymes so they can become clear..
....Cus the only award you'd win is Rv's queer of the year..----aight multi. but weak punch overall
......Ill give you viagra and you still couldnt be hard to beat...
So just save your self embarrasement and hold ctrl+alt+Delete-----sweet punch here
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Black--All u do is “lip shit”, big mouth, tongue must be like Gene Simmons
Bone jus a pussy.. I seen more man in support groups for women------ddaammnnn great opener straight ko with one bar
Preparin my funeral? Kid must have screws loose in his dome
Cuz I never heard dope rymes, from MC’s working in funeral homes----another clean punch good one here
Ya crew ashamed, look at u with nothing to say but “he tried tho”
Embarrassed of cats u lost to..While back u lost a battle to terri shchavio----damn thats dirty..lol..another great punch and good wordplay
I peeped some of ya battles, u wack.. I could come 1/8 assed and rip you
So bad Nobody gives u advice.. If u was a waiter, nobody would “Tip u”----your only weak punch
No wonder you don’t compete.. In P.R. their Olympic team can never contest*
Cuz all their peeps that could run, jump, and swim, are already in the U.S.-----great punch exellent flow also
Moderatin now? Shit, when RV voted him in, it was opposite day
When it comes to “words”, u like a ref‘s whistle.. Stopping the play**---aight punch but still hit
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aight i expect this battle to get very very close but i thought that Black had better quality punches and a lil better flow...ma advice to Bone in this battle is really nothing it was a good verse that had many strong points but lacked in certan areas.....for example some of your punches seemed to be forced next time you write something sit back and relax and imagin ur a person that is reading this for the first time...it will help alot.......as for Black all around great verse powerful punches but structure was a lil off try and fix that......my advice to you is to maybe try and add some noticeable punches (links) but thats about it great verse------my advice to both Mcees is try adding some multies. in ur verses it will give you an edge on the competition!!.
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with that being said my vote is for Black his verse just had more powerful punches.......but dont get me wrong this was very close......V/ The Black Plague
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