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Old 05-20-05, 12:43 AM   #6
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Voted For: 9th Degree

lmfao yo dis nigga killed solo da whole verse

9th degree- aight yo u had sum hott as punches on da real dey all hit harder den solos u had sum hott ass personals dem and da punches took dis battle ya structure was a lil off how u played off hiz verse about da position part was hott 2 u had sum good wordplay bout hiz country shit was hott fix ya strucutre tho yo u did have sum hot multies to it started off good threw da verse it was good and it ended good to so u get da win cuz of dat

solo-yo u talk alot i thaught u was gon win but u didnt all ya lines was stretched u did have sum punches tho i aint gon hold u but dey wasnt as good as 9th degree punches u did have sum nameplay on hiz name personals was kind of iffy ya structure shit realli needs to b fixed man ya verse started off kind of aight it was a lil dull threw it and it ended ok not a good drop from u fix ya strucutre have sum more creative punches and cum harder next time u gon win

vote- 9th degree
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