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hmm, im going with diman on this one
both came out with cool, unique topics, kickn' imagery in both....but i was feeling more emotion outta diman's, i thought she expressed her view alot better, and really but alot more emotion into her words....flooze, yours was cool, but i thought the vocab you used really restricted your emotion...and i didn't like your structure, mainly because it was really inconsistent....although thats not that big of deal.....it was one of the factors here because this was pretty close
but im going with diman, i enjoyed her verse more...came down to the emotion for me, diman had more, keep up both
v/diman
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