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Old 05-20-05, 01:49 AM   #21
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sorry i forgot to crituqe blacks verse--------------

your verse was lackin alot rhymes were basic the punches were there hit but not hard enough to win the battle wordplay was okay nothing speacil in it structre was good though personals werent anything speacil neither the flow of your verse was very choppy.....no hate though keep doin ya thing man
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