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Voted For: The Militant
This was a weak battle ima have to give this one to The Militant , he just came alittle harder
JaEX
Your verse was plain simple wack , your concepts were petty , and you had no punchlines.. you were talking about how this was your first battle , and how you were gonna win.. your structure was off , and was all over.. personals were ugh , cus there really wasnt any ..overall elevate alot , and read some tutorial on how to make punchlines , and personals..
The Militant
Your verse wasnt any better then jaex , you hust came alittle harder..your concepts were simply too.. learn to make harder punchlines..you had some okay personals...you won this battle in my point of view , just for using some punchlines , and some okay personals..keep it up
Vote- Militant
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