peepin... beat is hype... feelin that... shadowville come wit sum grime again..

hook @ start is coo... quality ain't the best tho..

flow is on, but too basic.. shud-a come alot more outside the box on this beat..
Lyrical content throughout is on point.. you shud really find a way to get better quality, like decent equipment, 'cause you got skill, but your qual drags it down to a low level where i am not feelin it.. lol...

you shud have switched up flow on the bridge after 3rd hook 2.. thats what a bridge is for..

but ne-way.. this was a decent track still...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...685#post2162685
^hit that up 4 me... got the Dj up in the mix, well worth tha peep

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