Voted For: MaRVJay1009
MarvJay1009 - this is probally the worst freestyle I have seen you wrote but this was still better than OneStepBeyond.. you had better punchlines and way better structure. and you flow was killin him. 7/10
OneStepBeyond - your flow was pathetic you did not even ryhme..you structure was bad and your freestyle was bad too. keep working hard tho.. 5/10
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