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Old 05-20-05, 01:32 PM   #9
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Voted For: 9th Degree

tight ass battle here sons

solo

>Create a new law son, this ain’t 1st or 2nd, I commit murder in the 9th Degree…
RV’s Gangsta?? The only time you touch a G is when ya type the key…
hmm, not feeling this one, weak 3/10
>Ya see flashing images of ya death, 9th looked at me and he blinked…
Vigilante?? Only time ya above the law is in chopper rides over the precinct…
little self glor on the first, and second was whack, lol 2/10
>Always with logical answers ‘n’ shit, seriously 9th must be a mass-debater…(masturbator)
So I guess the only thing for you to decide is…jerk off right now or later…
funny...5/10
>I’ll help ya diss…”Solo is gay!!” there you go 9th, you can have a freebie…
Got ya samurai sig so ya understand why ya lines make me wanna ‘hara-kiri’…*
not bad, 6/10
>Pot of golden lyrics got ya winnin…I get it, after all leprechauns are a lucky breed…
Now ya pots all empty, maybe that’s why ya no-showed in ya own fuckin league…
meh, didn't like the wording, but still, nice pers 5/10
>9th likes to be in charge of rhymes, copies ‘n’ pastes just so he can control a spit…
Claims to be “A Master of the Verbal Arts” but really he just talks a load of shit…
hah, i liked this one 7/10
>Challenged SPuL and me to a 2-on-1 I gotta admit it was a bold move…
But ya ain’t worth shit, it only takes one of us to write a check and own you…(cheque)
haha, good closer 7/10

overall: 35/70 = 50%....the start of your verse man, really hurt you i think...stuff wasn't that good, but you really picked up near the end, i think if you kept that consistency throught out, you coulda taken this easy....first part just had some dumb concepts/no personals.....but the end was cool...keep up

9th

>You're cocky as hell, but before that your skill we hardly knew
Someone said "Solo's dope!" I just replied "I'm Sorry...Who??"
dope personal, nice opener 7/10
>I've persevered, earned a rep, but your hopes were so bleak
You changed your name so you could hop my nuts if I hit a cold streak
meh, decent 5/10
>"So weak" is an understatement, your spittin' is cursed
You're the center of attention…when we see where you positioned your verse
hahaha, i laughed at this, nice pers again 7/10
>Yeah, "solo" lines are played, but really you don't bring forces
Only d/r's, oh, sorry, I mean all the King's horses
haha, clever 6/10
.But if I accused you of that, you'd get bent out of shape like limbos
You couldn't bring the pane if you were installin' my windows
cool...6/10
>Claim to be royalty, but I remain skeptical
And have your rhymes throne…in the trash receptacle
dope closer, 7/10

overall: 38/60 = 63% - hmm, i thought 9th's verse was more consistent, with harder punches, and his personals were really effective in this one....umm, but still, good battle, just that 9th came harder, with better wordplay, wittier punches...and had better personals.......

good battle though, keep up to both, no hate

v/9th degree
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