Voted For: Golden Dayz

hmmm, this was a cool battle

i was feeling golden's more though...although he lacked a little in emotion, the imagery was awesome and i really like the originality of the topic he chose, really had me involved with his verse....lady, yours was good, thought you had better emotion, tough idea to make work effectively i think, because i think it kinda took away from the overall enjoyment of the piece, jumping back and forth, it was neat and creative....but i think if you had more lines you coulda made it work better....just too short of a piece to do that idea with....

so yeah, both had nice verses, original..but im going with golden for overall enjoyment.....keep up to both though

v/The Revalation

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