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Old 05-20-05, 03:06 PM   #31
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Originally Posted by CA$per
CHORUS-thirteen years old i was up in jail.....
my moms couldnt pay tha price of my bail...
a young kid tryin to make it in that place....
but i looked to god,and never lost faith.....
VERSE 1-
it started as a youth trying to do sumthing new.....
but if i only knew tha path was bout to pursue....
in and out of trouble faster than a premature load....
people tried to reach me,its like there words were morse code....
so i kept doin drugs and killing my family life.....
i ------ up there life,cut there hearts like a knife....
i could feel tha tension at home,gettin thicker by tha hour.....
but they could only stand and watch,as if on an observation tower..
but every single day,as i watched my life fade away......
i was causing a massacer,like that one valintines day....

CHORUS-thirteen years old i was up in jail.....
my moms couldnt pay tha price of my bail...
a young kid tryin to make it in that place....
but i looked to god,and never lost faith.....
VERSE 2-
with tha drugs come jail,i was in tha pen like ink.....
that shit aint very classy,when yo toilets your sink....
id scrap my tooth brush on tha floor so i would feel secure....
knowing i could be shanked at night,i was never to sure....
eighteen months in tha box,only outside an hour a day....
id get beat,theyd put moves on me like it was a basket ball play....
but like i said at tha first yall,never loose faith in wut u believe....
cuz if ya dont give a shit youll be inna box on christmas eve...
now i got sum shit straight i only smoke cronic and drink....
but im still not all here,i sizzled sum wires on that binge i think.....

CHORUS-thirteen years old i was up in jail.....
my moms couldnt pay tha price of my bail...
a young kid tryin to make it in that place....
but i looked to god,and never lost faith.....
peace yall


^ya i felt ya shit there...nice wordplay and good structure...overall i think it would sound dope in audio format....~1~
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