Voted For: ~christyles~

call ya ghostwriter to make-sets, ya gonna get murked we'll take-bets/
this kid misses more punch-lines than keanu dodges bullets!/
wack opener
so i pull the trigga and send this kid into the next generation/
"fuck confidential" is this raps salutation, quick bar disintegration/
nope..
on a rampage, makin mc's eyes-sag and cleanin up the carnage with bloody-rags/
my lyrics so lethal, how you gonna spit rhymes when zipped up inside a body bag?/
decent
now this kid's clit is raw and hes bleedin' out the gap, im a certified "gyno-killer"/
got "caught up" in murkin cause this fools pussy is hairier than Michael Jackson in thriller!/
no

overall, work harder on ur punches… seriously

You write fair, but you a homo thug ya whole style is type squarrrrrrrre
I stall for none, so my punches is a Hit...All 4 One like fuckin I Swearrrrrr
hell no
i aint trying to act hard like u cuz u know a few thugs who bust gats
u must of lost-facts, cuz imma straight smoke ya ass like blowin erbal outta ya crack
decent
my flow straight DOPE, make u wanna shot it up N start riots
Proud to be 17? Ima eat this Pro Teen Mill like im on the Atkins Diet
wack
I'm straight monk'y-n around n u still better off Cage-n Kong...
U got no dope thoughts but CON put heat to ya ears like ya brain's a bong... be-gone
no son..

overall, elevate,

Christ took this one though.. just came less wack

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