Banned: Biting
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Voted For: Carlton Banks
Aii This IS what I Think
Carlton Banks
Aii Man You STarted off pretty weak Man Id Have to tell you bcuz nobody else will tell you HONESTLY how you did these days but I think THAT YOU NEED TO0 WORK ON fixin ya structure up a lil bit bcuz Some people Will Judge your verse jus basically on how it looks which is a bunch of bullshit if you ask me Becuase you Cant Judge a book by its cover so i think that your verse LYRICALLY was terrfic but your verse Strcutre like was kinda off so try to fix that up a little bit in the future
HIT UP THE BATTLE LINK IN MY SIG
Casper
Aii man Although your strcuture was on Your verse was off man Some of your bars didnt work together to create a correct punch and ya shit was really off LYRICALLY but I think That You Will fix that up in the time that comes to past
HIT UP THE LINK IN MY SIG
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