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Old 05-20-05, 06:34 PM   #19
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Voted For: Carlton Banks

i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.
was feelin the wordplay a lot and good opener
mistaked me for a rookie at text, you see Ca$per you define what doubt is.
because, you payed your ass when i told you to put your money where your mouth is.
lmao...good punch
Ca$per can't text for himself, i mean his name says it all..
you could pick your feet from the floor, elevate then fall!*
eh...ok
stinky, fatso and stretch could even ghostwrite your verses.
But..
it'd be the second time you all finished up in hearses!
...
you could think you'd be dropping hot on me, and still wouldn't be testing me.
& come to an abrupt end, & i'll give everyone amnesia, when your just a memory.
good closer...liked this more then last 2 bars...

this kidz lackin sumthing needed,but yet seems to be smart....
cause i mean hes got sum good grammer isnt that a start.....
Didnt feel like a punch, not a good opener
yo this is a rap battle so u cant win by dancin like tom jones...
but "ITS NOT UNUSUALl",to see fagetz holdin a micro phone...
eh...i liked the connection between the punch and the setup but punch felt weak
gotta bite off a pansey name?man what tha fukks with that....
that would be like if your a white boi,thats callin yourself black
nah...
man u just killed that show for me,i used to love that shit.....
cause gay people shouldnt front such thingz,be real and legit..
nope...isnt a punch it just feels like your just talking...
homie your prolly an alias anyway,so whats tha point in tryin..
if thats true ill know if i win this cause youll definitly be whinin
again its just eh...
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...
ok...best bar in the verse but still weak

Overall no hate to both but I pick carlton for harder punches basically and some wordplay...i liked his opener and closers, casper i wasnt really feelin your verse no hate...just the punches were weak and werent up to par with carltons...
Best bar from each verse IMO:

Carlton...
i'll inscribe my bars on your brain, so at least you get some insight.
then have your head dangling opposite your left shoulder so you can spit right.

Casper
but fukk it im out ill waste no more barz on this bel air reject...
bitin names is played out,like volcanoes as a science project...

Good luck to both
peace
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