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Old 05-20-05, 07:36 PM   #6
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this was aight, some decent concepts..
bit stretched which takes away from the effectivness
of your punches, add multi's for flow or shorten ya lines...
but dont get me wrong it was aight........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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