Voted For: Melancholy

Melancholy - you had some nice punchlines in there.. you also had good opener and ender...you flow was iiight and your flow transition was tight..keep working hard 7/10

Theory - man that was an iiight verse...you ryme with some basic words you need to elevate...your punchlines did not really hit....your opener was tight but your ender was pathetic.. 5/10