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Old 05-20-05, 11:09 PM   #45
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

aight 1 sided battle realli

marv-ya punches was good yo u had sum good personals structure was off like a mutha fukka fix ya structure on da real u had sum good wordplay and multies ya vocab was nahh u aint have none it started off good threw da middle it was good had sum good punchlines and it ended good just fix ya structure

typical-aight yo u came out queenz 2 many times n ya verse have sum different personals on him ya punches was kool personals was nahh u had da same 1s realli ya structure was good wordplay a lil bit multies nah aint have none ya verse started off ok da middle was kool jus had da same personals ova & ova n it ended ok have different personals and cum harder

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