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Old 05-21-05, 02:33 AM   #35
BiZzO
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Voted For: The Sorrow

aiiight first all good battle yo, i liked both of ur verses to a certain extent... aiight lets break it down...

Sorrow - your opener was pretty good, closer was also a nice one... your whole verse flowed all the way through, i didnt fall of point anywhere... your vocabulary was very good, didnt genralise at all, your punches were hard hittin and you had me chucklin with some of em... personals were good at least u did some reaserch.... and ur structure was good and creativity was dope....
fav bar... "This kid is done, fronting an undefeated record of just four wins
But tell me, how come you don't up the battles that ya losing in?" 8.5/10

AckRite - aiight lets go, your opener was pretty good, but ur closer was a bit of a let down, your verse flowed well but some things were a bit hard to understand the way u werded them... but overall that was aiight, your vocabulary was pretty dope, you used some realli good words... ok ur punches were aiight a few that were sorta played out, and could have been better... your structure was very good and your creativity was good...
fav bar... "Sorrow Stalked My Threads 2 Quote Me...Nigga Hop Off My Saddle
Fuckin 'Psychic Fraud'..He Made Da Wrong Prediction Of Dis Battle!" overall 7.5/10

opener - Ackrite
closer - Sorrow
flow - Sorrow
punches - Sorrow
vocab - AckRite
structure - AckRite
creativity - Sorrow
personals - Sorrow
enjoyment - Sorrow
overall - Sorrow, no hate just how i saw it...