Nice drop right here fam! Vocabulary was at a high level as usual and I just love the concept you are working with here, don't think I have seen it on RV before. Emotion was without a doubt the strongest aspect of your piece together with the imagery. You have an excellent writing style with a very vivid, poetic vibe. Had insightful lines in there that make the readers stand still and think about stuff for a sec.

Great job!

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