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Old 05-21-05, 10:12 AM   #9
.Poetic.
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Voted For: Carlton Banks

Out of 161 Posts.U only dropped "Shits"Like "Dumpin" ova Hill
Its Funny Cuz Your only Way of Elevation is Jumpin ova Will
Nah....4/10
Carlton Couldnt get "TrailzBlazein" if he was Bastien Tel-Fair
They Didnt tell you Ya Cuzzin.Iz the only 1 Rappin in Bel-Air
Meh...5/10
Cant "Fly" ya Weight Here.ok.Let me get outta ya Way Fass
Like Uncle Phill Wrestlin Jeffrey.Carl im Outta Ya Weight Class
[B}So foreced, you had to say Fass instead of Fast...3/10[/B]
Believe it or not..I alwayz wanted to Jump your Moms Bones
U Lost this its "Not Unsual".Give it up &Go Listen to Tom Jones
Coulda worded this better....6/10

Overall: 18/40


talents what i hold, and i advise you troop to get it now.
because you've been written off, more than a fucking pen-pal!
Funny...6/10
your falling off, if you think you can win, drop max in the ring.
cuz your watered down verse will only put a damper on things.
Word...6/10
i'm an alias yup, identity hidden no wonder jimmys scared...
cuz i'd send you up the creek, but i can see your already there.
Meh...5/10
got ko'd in korv, so now hes desperate for poetical notions..
so he stepped in k-bees just to try and toy with my emotions!
Hahaha....7/10

Overall: 24/40


Carlton Banks came harder in this with better, harder punches..

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