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Old 05-21-05, 09:07 PM   #13
LyricalMa$tamind
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Voted For: $Upstate$

mookie- unda da line limit
u spossed 2 spit 10 - unlimited u only spit bou 5
ur structure wuz fucked, punches wuz shit n errthang else wuz pretty basic
u need 2 really elevtae n read a rules
2/10
elevateeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


$upstate$- easy win 4 u ur punches were iight but u came pretty basic herre as well, nuffin 2 nice that had me sayin"oooooooo" nahmean n e way u need 2 elevate also, ur structure wuz fucked as well n u need 2 stop tryin 2 cram 2 many lyrics in 1 line. Work on ya strucure n rhymes. Come up wit mo lyrical diction n jus keep ELEVATIN!!!!
5/10

pretty wack battle but ima have tah give dis 1 tah $UPSTATE 4 comin harder wit betta shit

my v/$UPSTATE$

PLEASE RTF ON DA BATTLE IN MAH SIG WIT AN HONEST VOTE
.............THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !
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