Voted For: OneStepBeyond

onestepbeyond u super wack..i hope u dont spit 4 da wealth.
dis kid know's he a bitch shit even he made a thread dissin him self.
o.k, Im not even gonna follow, the link, I see what you sayin, and I'll assume he owned himself, decent personal.
ya record 6-5 u lucky should be 0-11 cuzz ya verses r so weak.
you ONE STEP BEyOND who? not even a 'person with no feet'.
This was played out, setup was fillerish, you could have packed it with something that would have increased the punches effectiveness, average bar.
i aint a thug im just think not fam & u wanna harm me hey.
O.G. dont mean optimistically genius it means Onestepbeyond is Gay.
first line... check your grammar, cuz im just think not fam, is missing some words, Im not gonna play fill in the blanks, punch was pretty good, nothing spectacular but effective.

6.5/10

Marvs gay, let me be less mean, you a nightmare? then ima wet dream,
The next best thing to faking your background info. is changin your desk theme,*
lol, this was a clever punch, I liked the wordplay- flowed well, im not sure bout the setup line though.
You rap about guns, but how come you've never even sprayed your axe,
What a crazy bitch! Marv couldn't make it 'big' even if he wrote Jay in CAPS,
lol this was pretty good, setup is o.k, the punch was decent- so far rhyme scheme as well.
Complaining about mother jokes being played, in which case, alright Marv,
Your damn moms so fat her mother fuckin cerial bowl has a lifegaurd...**
ROFLMAO- lol, that did it. great closer.

8/10

I just think that OneStepBeyond was more consistent, he had a great closer, where I liked Marv's closer but it was the only bar I really liked in his verse, and OneStepBeyond was more consistent. Vote OneStepBeyond.

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