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Old 05-22-05, 01:17 AM   #36
Sweft
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Originally Posted by Spoken Word is Bond
I liked how you personified hip-hop but some of the lines were kind of odd if you think about it. Like where you talked about your wanting to hold hands and the part where you leaned in to kiss.
These lines kind of made me think that maybe you forgot for a second
that you were talking about hip-hop.


Well, first and formost thank your for your input. Think about this mkay. When your with a bomb ass chick right and walkin´ in the mall. You wanna hold her hand and put your arm around her to show her off.
Now about me kissing Hip Hop. Ever seen people freestyling? You know you been waiting for that moment to jump in and show people what you got. That is what I mean by the kiss. People laughing at me because I was trying to freestyle.
I didnt forget what I was writing about. I thought this through for a while and it took forever. I am a slow writer.
Well thank you and the favor will be returned!

Sweft
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