Do you remember your first love?
The break-ups to make-up,
The calls to wake up,
To tell em’ you love em,’

Wow Im going through this now. I mean its not my first love but its a more mature love. I like your style alot.
I remember when I used to write nothing but love poems to get girls. Than I started getting more creative and learning more words and experincing life and writing about it.

Overall this was a great opem. Structure was good and it was easy to follow.

Overall. 8-10

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