wow this battle was real nice and so close........

dq: your verse was structured well, flow was on point, vocab was nice and emotion.....the imagery was beautiful.....i loved the way you told the story.....so well that i could actually picture what everything looked like......i feel like you just edged this battle out basically for the amount of imagery and emotion you had in the verse....seemed so real.....

babylon: yours was a nice piece, you showed a lil less complexity than dqs piece but i liked the way that you put it into acts 1, 2 and 3.....like a "play" or somethin. i felt like that was real creative.......your verse didn't show as much emotion as dqs though....so my vote goes to DQ for a high level of imagery and emotion

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