Damn.......you got a lot better since the last time I heard you. Your flow and presence are much better. You may want to work on the words you accent though. You put a hard accent on the last word in each line which makes you sound a bit newbish.......but all in all this was pretty good
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Blackmage.......first thing I noticed was your quality. You definately need some help here. If you go to Audio Assistance and look at the very first stickied thread called "Day One Audio" it could probably help you a lot. You have a nice flow and you punches were cool too, but you really need to step up the quality.