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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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This was feedback posted for Skriptz
IP:
Skriptz, I'd tell you to reach my level, but you can't open the door.
So I'll open it for you, & drive you through it and put a new look on the board!
7/10 catchy an ok openor
This geek'll weep, when he see's I've just dropped better..
Than him..
Because the way I shred Skriptz, I'm reffered to as a angry director!
8/10 creative nice punch line
You want to see lyrical accelaration, so Skriptz awaits his fate.
But I don't measure my speed, cuz' I'll beat you at any rate.
4/10 didn’t like it as much
We all anticipate your drops, but we know it's wack as shit.
So I'll kill two bird's with one stone, & throw his verse back @ him.
7/10 it was a punch
Skriptz a commercial fool, busts the bling bling tryna be cool..
But the only decent video you'd make, is of you flossing my family jewels!
7/10 it was a good closer liked the last part
[b]Overall: 33/50
Coming w/ punches.. but we both know their not gonna hit
How can your rhymes end.. when there’s nothing to begin with
8/10 I like the 2nd line good bar
Leaving this kid hurt.. so when u walk.. u’ll be limpin
& ur bout to get killed.. now Hack dot.. aint worth flippin
7/10 its ok not that good nice
Even though I know ur wack.. ur verses are the same
Never felt ya punches.. like went out & bought Novocain
7/10 again nice
Stop being a faggot.. ur ego shows me that ur full of urself
Cuz Rv read your punches.. & put them back on the book-shelf
7/10 ok
Lets get this over with.. bout to beat u in a quick flash
& if I wanted to throw something away..
........................I would throw ur rhymes in the trash
5/10 wack closer
Overal: 34/50
Vote: Skriptz
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