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Old 05-22-05, 04:02 PM   #20
Daubs
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Voted For: Aurora Sky

Ima win by a landslide and put the game in a stand still, thinkin you'll win? compared to me im a mountain u a ant hill'

ok, could be worded better

Get ya fuckin head split, You might as well quit, well kid, you winnin is as impossible as rick james doin another chappelle skit'

funny punch

Son my punches will wreck you till you cant stand anymore, and dont act like you in the streets cuz u hard, its cuz ya familys poor'

nice closer

nice verse, good flow and punches...not feelin structure toomuch.

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hey hey hey

*yo my flows are hotter than beyounce nude*
*while your shit is fuck up like a comdon used* bar 1

played and wack

*hey i'll dismolish ya body put it ova a open flame*
*toss ya ashes in the sky so you can live up to ya bar 2name*

PERSONAL ATTEMPT BUT NOT HARD HITTIN

*so spit ya verse, let a word slip*
*an find ya ass like ya mom...fucking rip* bar 3

no way u put that...wack

seriousely need to sort ya structure and line length out.

its obvious aura got this. mainly for his punches.

no hate

rtf in sig.
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