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Old 05-22-05, 05:41 PM   #12
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Voted For: AckRite

Ak:

Fagget You Losin................Stop Temptin Me, This Devil Takin Ya Soul
Dont Lie!, You A 'Interstate Prostitute'.....Das Y Dudes 'Payin Ya Tolls'!
8/10 nice openor sweet to the point
Permanant Cum Stains On Ya Lips???......See What Suckin Dick Did
He Grew Up A NOBODY.....Every Class Thought He Was Da NewKid!
7/10 ok good punch
Loser Ya Lifes Time Is Runnin Out, Almost On E.......You Have No Aim
Lose Da Cane, I'ma Have Ya 'MIND DRIPPIN...Like Its 'CRYIN 4 BRAIN'!
7/10 good closer

Overal: 22/30

New kid:
u trash dike..........................ya skills been n da cinerator since last night
ya money dont talk.............................cuz like chris tucker u just act rite?
10/10 good punch line good opener
u was on maury tellin ya story bout how a bunch of nothin got lost u poor b
LoL da onli time ya gurl came..... was wen she was screamn NewKid 'or-G'
5/10 to plain
ya lines soft....................i wuld of gave u props but i wulda been lyin dawg
nah i dont mean 'unplug da clock'..... wen i say give ya rappin sum 'time-off'
6/10 good closer

Overall: 21/30

v/ Aktrite close battle but he gets it

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