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Voted For: REDZONE

Yo Disses Are Short Changed, For U Fellow MC'Z O'z Are Bankrupt//
Guess Datz Why U In Da REDZONE, Never On Da Come'Up//
DECENT...
Stick Da Emotion ThumbUp, Cyberly Givin U Propps//
Fake Recognize Fake Aye?? Yo Flowz Immitatin Milli Vanilli Dropps//
nah played...
Pull Out All Da Stoppz, Because Datz Where It Stoppz, You'd Have Too Steal My Mic//
Your Never A Step Ahead, Lyke Cheating In A Walk Race On A Byke//
1ST LINE NAH, 2ED WAS BASIC BUT DECENT..
Your Da Illest Yeah? Booo! Hahaa SYKE//
Diz Pussy Getz Fucked Lyke A Set Of Twin Dykez//
aight..
I Really Dunt Wanna Fight, Mainly Becuz Ahm NICE//
It Wuldnt Be Fair On U, Even Tho Erry Hooker Has HIS Price//
nah not feeling it..
Ur Nuthin Mo Than Vice City, Rappin Shitty An Getting Played By Kidz//
U Culdnt Even Sell Yo Shitz On Ebay With Free Bidz//
ha good one..
Try Watching Porno Vidz, Releaze A Little Tension//
We All Need Elevation, But U Need A Fucking Suspension///
decent...
Im Da Newest Kid On Da Block, So Diz Why He Loves Me//
Got Me Confuzed Wit Da Boy Band An He Sayz Ahm Lovely//
nah...
Ur Pretty Gay, Attrracting Cock Like A Sausage Fest///
If Life Wuz A Metaphour Diz Whore Is Happy Being Second Best
good ending...

u had a couple iffy lines i wasnt feeling but u had some good punches in there some basic couple celever but not a bad verse just plez fix ya verse lay-out dont cram everything together space it out bar by bar / slash by / slash it makes it alot easy to read and follow which fucks up ya flow 6.0/10

battle me, where ya vest at, mah flow'll leave ya chest wet...
I'm tha best yet, can't test that, you like a stripper get messed at...
multis decent... could of had a better hit thou..

mah THEORY will leave you KHAOZ, worst than black plague...
tha gat spray, ya back lay, off tha shots tha mac made...
ha im feeling that 2ed line good flow...

Red'll destroy ya cuz, then preceed defense ta finish off ya family...
exploit and expose ya wit mah 6 sense like stutterin stanley...
nice hit feeling this bar creative...
you jus shit, only way you buss shit is nuts you buss quick...
can't touch this, mah flow MC Hammer ya guts bitch...
straight raw i like it...
unbelievable how RV accept homo's, that try ta flow fa promo's...
no mo' of you faggot, mah punchline get cha strike 3 like Nomo...
played....
you slow mode, even special olympics couldn't figure out...
so call me a REDneck wit a noose I'm hangin this nigger out...
nah def aint feeling this....

with out a doubt Red leave ya floods exitin out cha pierced wounds...
it's automatic that cha don't wanna put cha life in a situation wit a fierce dude...
just flowing not direct hits...
Imma gift wit tha flow, KT ya style is ugly and cursed...
before attemptin ta flow a lil advice GO HOME AND STUDY MAH VERSE
could of been a better ending... 7.5/10

u started off good had some decent multis some hit but they wasnt hard hitting some raw lyrics but u fell of towards the end which hurts but u had way more harder hits still and some decent multis but next time dont fall of towards the end some-times that might cost u a battle stay up....