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Voted For: Stanza
this is my first time votin on a topical, so dont hate if you dont like my vote...
Stanza, you pulled off using the word "rain" like 30 times, and it came out good... i really actually like this peace. I like the diffrent ways you decribe summer rain, and what it does... a couple bars were stretched but nothing major...
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I Have Determined Faith The size of a Mustard Seed
To Move Mountains & Crush Opposers That Try To Suceed
i think this means you have zero faith, but you dont need cuz your still "strong".... very good peice i think
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Mr Hahn, i feel like i was in highschool english again, damn, i mean good vocab, but i think your kind of cocky is saying "this was just a quick keystyle"... thats one of the other reasons im voting against you, its kinda grimey that this a crew battle with a pretty nice topical topic, and you say "its a quick keystyle" i think thats very disrespectful, but anyways...
the flow was pretty str8, like i said vocab was good...
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Remaining away, watching how heavens fight hells
Attaining sense of will, glaring in the distance as the ground swells
i could visualize that pretty well... but you seemed to dtraw frmo the topic, or you were just kinda "vague". I voted for Stanza, his was very specific to the topic...
good battle tho
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