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Old 05-23-05, 12:54 AM   #7
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hmm....both were okay, woulda been nice if they were expanded a little more

but i thought judicial took it, iggy's was more of a poem, still good, but i thought judicial had better emotion/imagery.....iggy's story was better though, but i think he tried too much to rhyme....came off as forced and took aways from his verse

so yeah, v/judicial
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