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Old 05-23-05, 02:16 AM   #11
Kawn Flixx
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This was a pretty decent drop... it was well rounded..
Probably one of the best verses ive read from casper..
Your lyrics were good they were on point..
made your song really good..
Structure was decent , Flow was on point..
Chorus to me was wack , im not feelin it
thought it could have been better..
Overall nice job keep it up
elevate on wordplay and vocab usuage..
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