Meh, this was a below average battle in my opinion. It didn't
really seem like either put too much time into developing a solid
idea behind their poems. Stanza, your poem confused the hell out
of me to be quite honest. I was lost with all of ..... and randomness
of your lines. If there was a concrete idea somewhere in there i'm
sorry but i completely missed it. Whyte, not that great from you either
man. I really can't say I was feeling your approach but at least I could
grasp what you were talking about. Kind of simplistic in you wording
and imagery but sometimes that's enough; and in this case it was.

V/ Whyte...more coherent/personal preference

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