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Old 05-23-05, 06:14 AM   #45
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Voted For: LexiKon



My flow kill "emcee's" like SARS i'll get you "$ik with it"[1]
You want this win PM your D/R's oops thats "...Xplizit...."[2]
You couldn't conect with "Solid Punches" if you threw "Frozen Juice Packets"
Bitch pretends so much he deserves a new acomplishment "RV's best actress"[3]
And if this "ACTOR" can "FREESTYLE" whats with all the "Skriptz" [4]
First time this dude ducked me it felt like I "Meta-Bitch"[5]
And after this run in he'll change his alias quick[6]
So people won't remeber him as the dude who PRE-WRIT[7]

Yo besidez dat openning line which wuz bigging yoself up dat rest of da verse wuz nice az pie Lexikon, da punchlinez wuz on point an da personalz made perfect sense after u explained dem which made em hit even harder, da flow wuz rite on point, an besides dat opening line dere iz not nuthing i can fault yo verse definately getz u da win because it wuz just on point basically an each line made its mark

mcskitlz at me with some weak punches, like them shits would hurt me*
You can’t spell skittles, & I thought your disses were directly to your family
I’ve seen your previous battles, & already you have no damn technique
Compare my other rhymes to yours...and it looks like you came weak
He answered my callout, and put his fists up, like he wanted to fight
It’s kinda funny how you can’t rap, but yet you picking up the MIC
Funny how you thinking you tough, seems you like to wear pink t-shirts
And your mom’s told me that you had almost died of rug burn at birth

not feeling yo verse skriptz, it wuznt much 2 go off, u dint have any noticeable personalz an da punchez didnt really have an effect what so ever, i cant really say u had 1 line dat i wuz actually feeling, nuthin hit hard, da whole verse wuz personaless an u need 2 step yo rap game up because Lexikon made a mockery of u skriptz

vote/ Lex fo da harder hittin, more creative an better personalz