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Old 05-23-05, 06:19 AM   #10
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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

It don’t take a rocket scientist to discover how whack you are.
Your rap IQ points are low, stupid mc, you can’t even make a bar
Call your self khoas?, IF you the one who bombed the towers 9/11
You can elevate, by killing yourself and sent your own soul to heaven
I’m not a prophet, but I know your not going to win this battle
saw your last pieces, and believe me your easy like a baby with a rattle
And no people I’m not lying this kid got beat by a body wash product!
Your no profit, you can go into a coffee shop, but still can’t make star bucks
Put C-4 on your keyboard but still your keys couldn’t make khoas
This kid thought he can spit lyrically nice by using Barbie floss

not a bad verse affliction but dere wuznt nuthin dat had me like ''oh'' when i wuz reading it do u kno wut i saying???? fo instance dat closer wuznt hitting at all, u need 2 focus on yo oppenent an making him look like a fewl, most of yo verse wuld of been ok fo an open mic verse but in a battle not many of yo linez hit hard

Hit Diz Mark Out Da Park, Whyd U Even Step To Da Plate
Therez Plenty Fish In Da Sea An I Used Diz Fat Fuck Az Bait
Losingz Yo Fate Lyke A HighSchool Dropouts Existance
Id Lyke 2 See Yo Punchez Connect When We At Such A Distance
Ya Goin Down In History Az Da Ugliest 2 Grace Godz Green Earth
Not 2 Mention Da Only Child 2 Have Cosmetic Surgeory At Birth
Straight Up Mayn, Fo' A Newb U Aint All Dat Bad
At Least U Get My Thanx Fo Bein Da Easiest Win I Ever Had

KhAoZ ThEoRy yo verse wuz pretty whack 2, u had 2 barz i wuz feeling da highschool existance bar an da closer.....dat closer won u diz battl, but at least u focused on making a mockery of yo oppenent which is also another thang dat goez in yo favor

Vote = KhAoZ ThEoRy