http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=191877
Plz cud someone plz tell me how Bonecollector's vote is unexplained!!!!!!!!(in dat battle^^^^)
N if it aint add it on plz!!!!!
One / two word feedback for the breakdown.. ie: wack opener, wack, decent, weak opener... didn't really give real explanation.
That is not 1/2 words:
Overall this was a weak battle but i think paradox took this one, he came alittle harder better pucnhlines.. okay personals
overall keep it up both and elevate
^ That part of the feedback was generic... no examples of personals or which punchlines were better