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Old 05-23-05, 07:16 AM   #1182
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Plz cud someone plz tell me how Bonecollector's vote is unexplained!!!!!!!!(in dat battle^^^^)

N if it aint add it on plz!!!!!

One / two word feedback for the breakdown.. ie: wack opener, wack, decent, weak opener... didn't really give real explanation.

That is not 1/2 words:
Overall this was a weak battle but i think paradox took this one, he came alittle harder better pucnhlines.. okay personals
overall keep it up both and elevate


^ That part of the feedback was generic... no examples of personals or which punchlines were better
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