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Old 05-23-05, 07:25 AM   #20
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Voted For: P.aradox

aiight decent battle both need to elevate.. especially u skitzo...
paradox - your verse was good, was a little simple and genralised but was good, flowed very well, good vocabulary, your structure was a lil bit off but wasnt bad, and your punches hit overall pretty well... 7.5/10

Skitzo - your verse was ok, it flowed well but went off about half through... punches were aiight and u had a good structure, work on ur vocabulary a bit more... you also need to work on ur creativity a bit more cause ur verse was a bit played... 6/10

opener - S
closer - P
flow - P
punches - tie
structure - S
vocabulary - P
creativity - P
enjoyment - P
punches - P
v/ P no hate just how i saw it....