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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

kid wants to battle me,but needs help from sumone else new..
thats not lookin very good,kinda herbish on tha part of you....
just flowing where the hits at??...

i said set it up for minimum time,and he sets it for 4320 minz...
it takes u that long cause spittin for u is like a fish with no finz
nah i aint feeling it...

i got a THEORY for you, write for 2 dayz,still come up shy....
dogg either u in tha wrong game,or u spittin when u high.....
i spit better high and no this aint good eother..

cause your rapz come up shorter than a midget on his knees
but u must just be ITCHIN to loose,like u infested wit fleas.....
there u go much better...

so take your best shotz,when u spit rymes its all blankz.....
b-girl askin if u a legendz!!dogg u aint even in noob rankz....
good diss..

ha funny and thats not a joke,i peeped sum of your new shit..
wasnt sure weatha to keep laughin or hit tha toilet and be sic your style is like garbage,im bout to make yo ass retired....
but if u was in livin legendz im like trump sayin your fired.....
ok ending u could of hit alot better in the beginning that was weak but u got better as i read some of ya punches was aight just need to hit harder and get more creative aight fam.. 6.5/10

Diz Shitz Too EZ.....................

Lyrical Murder A Livin Legendz, Who Lost Mo Than He Won, But Claimz He GREAT?!
Over A Thousand Posts, An We STILL Waitin On U Too ELEVATE
ha nice diss... *better start so far..*

Nuthin But HATE, If Skill Lived Up 2 Ya Mouth, You May Be a DANGER
U Claim I'm An EZ Win? Guess Yo Parents Dint Teach U Not 2 Mess Wit STRANGERZ
nah that was weak....

Ur GHOST, Dont BOAST, Only Thang U Serve Iz ''WENDYS''
Faggotz Idea Of ''Off Da Dome Spitz'' Iz Gettin Up Off Hiz ''BENT-KNEEZ''
ha good diss...

Check It..Call Me BENTLEY, A Higher Class Than My OPPOSITION
Strippin Naked At Clubz Iz Da Only Tyme You'll Be In ''POLE POSITION''
good...

U Improving? Datz An Impossible MISSION, Better Call On TOM CRUISE
U'd Think Wit'cha RapName, It'd Be U Givin Out BOO'Z
ok name play decent diss...

I Gues Roles Reversed, Ya Verse? Shit It Should Of Been REHEARSED
Losing A Forceful Habit Huh?! I Bet You Still Trynna Say Your CURSED
decent..

Grab Hold Of Yo PURSE, Cuz After I Fuck You Over, I Plan Too ROBB
When I Signed Up 2 RapVerse, I Never Imagined I'd Have A SLOB ON MY KNOB
fuck them bloods but not really a good hit thou....

So Wit Mah Very Last BAR, Skill Wize, I'll Show U Just How FAR You ARE
U Fell Off! Lyke Gary Coleman On Stilts Trynna REACH FOR THE STARS!!!!!!!
aight ending... 7.5/10

u had a way better verse then i saw from befor u had a couple of good punches some was celever and creative a few good diss and what not but honestly this was way better then the last battle i read and voted on khaosz keep elevating fam and plez dont start no beef ova me not voting for u on the other battle cuz if u want it then set it up other then that holla at me..........