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Old 05-23-05, 03:59 PM   #71
p4ntzistheish
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Okay so i'm supposed to sugarcoat a track that I feel wasn't good at all. would you have rather me said...

I didnt like the structure of this track. By lining up your lines you could have fixed the flow which also was pretty bad. Also the wordplay was bad and you came very basic, not to mention the little breaks you have...it wasn't written in a good quality. 2/10..

there are you happy lol....
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