Banned: Biting
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IP:
ha ha ha^^^, anyway. this piece was very nice, i like the structure that was forplayed in this. i like the way you binded everything to make sence. very nice syllables in someplaces. i like the repitition in some places also. this was in an indepth run of poetic rythm. this is a very good style of writing. keep your head up. holla back.
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