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Old 05-23-05, 09:17 PM   #2
~*Khatharsis*~
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NOPE. not at all. i really dont like this flow. i know alot of styles like this. and its not a very good one. this flow was mediocre. not up to standards. the syllable counts on your lines were off by many. but its ok. i rate this 7/10....you can do better.
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