yeah i thot it was a real original piece i liked the concept n the meaning behind the words, structure was...meh...lol but its a poem so maybe u wanted it to be like that! anyways keep comin up wit original shit like that i enjoyed readin it!

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This is my sig. what?

I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!